2014年7月2日 星期三

完結文章的技巧 (六) Reflection

文以載道,更可抒發感情,很多時候撰寫記敍文和抒情文時,如果能善用此技巧完結文章,一方面會使讀者明白作者對整個記敍事件或某件深刻事例的感受,另一方面亦感性地讓讀者知悉導致事件的責任誰屬,以至閱過文章後,易與作者產生共鳴。下列兩個例子可作說明:

1)      Topic: A page in my diary
When I look back upon my past years, most of what happened to me were blurred by the ride of events. However, I can still remember quite clearly the most thrilling moment when I first entered school.

2)      Topic: A bitter experience on the result announcing day
No one was to blame but myself. If I had worked hard, I would have passed the examination. This was a good lesson to me. I sadly closed my report and made up my mind on what to do next term.
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今期修改句子 I have learnt a lot of vocabularies today.
上期問题:He talks to me friendly.
答案:  Friendly 應作 cordially amicably
考核文法重點:   (adverb)
題解及分析:  很多同學誤解, 凡英語匯有ly 尾均為副. 其實只有形容詞 + ly才是; friendly 結構乃名 (friend) + ly, 只是形容詞, 不能用之形容詞動詞talk, cordiallyamicably 友善及和善地才對.
            當然, 也可以下列形式表示:  
                       He talks to me in a friendly way.
                       : 英語不少形容詞, 結尾為 ly 而非副, lovely, lonely, homely也可用上述形式表達.
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